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like my poem ?
any suggestion for a title ? my original sounds corny .. i need constructive critism
'Losing to a Midget '
My determination soon efface
As tomorrow comes
And no longer shall I manage to embrace
You standing so almighty
And smirking your malicious yellow smile
Oh!
How much I dislike thee,
You midgets appeared again
When I assumed you gone
Out of my sight, for I wish for it to be.
You with your rigid golden helmets
Never giving up and appearing still
Seizing my territory
And bothering yonder worn down hill
Afraid of the darkness
Thee hide and crouch down
Camouflaged green in sheer success
Awaiting for the morning for a second battle round
Days go on like this
Battle between the midgets and I
All my effort and time I maintained to achieve
Wasted under scorching sun
Everything I have tried
My lost, alas, you won
Thee proudly standing Dandelions
I think its' funny!
The rhyme and rhythm aren't perfect, but the ideas are good and humorous.
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